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There are times where a statement can have multiple interpretations.
For example:

I visited my sister and her dog, Julie, and she is quite a bitch.

would have better have been written as,

I visited my sister and her dog, Julie, and Julie is quite a bitch.

Bob's body was found in a very decayed state, in West Virginia.

would have better have been written as,

Bob's body was found in West Virginia, and in a very decayed state.